Q.2) Discuss the Naturalisation of Humans and Humanisation of Nature. (15 marks)
Q.3) Make a temporal analysis of approaches to Human Geography. (20 marks)
Q.4) State the concept of gender-responsive climate policies. Discuss their relevance in the fight against climate change. (15 marks)
positives:1 good points
negatives: 1 u have presented the opinion that 1st there were determinism but now possibilism has triumphed; i believe u could score more if u showed that both are still happenin as we speak( ex: we still can’t predict earthquakes ; but on the contrary we are exploring space like never before)
2 conclusion looks a bit off
suggestion: read the qn a few times before answering; for now forget abt time management
Yes…i should improve…will in future…thanks…
positives:1 good compartmentalisation; good flow
2 have mentioned most modern approaches reasonably well
negatives: 1 try not to use ambiguous intros( though that was a nice idea)
2i believe u need to start from ancient geographers like erastothenes, pliny…then move to19th century- Kant,ritter,Ratzel…then modern and post modern
3. Try to include the names of geographers
4. absence of conclusion- felt like an abrupt end
suggestion: dont worry now. u will get the geographers names once we move onto perspectives of human geo
Yes…i agree that a bit of philosophy should hav been included…but since these questions are restricted to class 12 ncert..i dint do it…thanks for review…
Kindly review StudyVille?
positives:1 good conclusion
negatives:1 didn’t write relevance of such policies
2.some points felt like they were being repeated
suggestions:
try to have a subtopic for each demand of the qn. Remember to write in points
keep it up u .have improved reasonably over the last week
Thanks…Working on my speed and structure…will improve in future..
Q1
kindly review @disqus_vFxQNIkgUf:disqus
Sure will review…
kindly review @StudyVillae
q1
From where did u get all this content ??
I restricted myself to class 12 ncert…so can’t say much about it…I’ll leave it to StudyVillae to review…
Also i guess the language used was bit complicated for me…
Structure seems good…
Keep writing…
you will get the content once we go into perspectives of HG…stay calm and keeep writing
q2
Hey !
Your answers included ample of examples….that my and lacked…but i guess u missed out on explaining that concept itself…
Rest…no comments..very good…
Keep writing…
q3
Hey…u hav included perspectives part..i hav’nt done that yet…so i cannot review it…as i dont hav knowledge about that…
But one thing..nice use of diagram..but do it using pen…
Keep writing…
thanks…I’m still not confident of using pen for sketches…i’ll try
q4
Your conclusion was awesome…
Intro…especially the first line was a bit complicated..i donno if it’s only for me…you can try keeping it simple..
Body part was good…especially your structure and segregation of parts of the answer was really good.
Keep writing…
yes i should make it more simpler…thanks
u could have written more…but whatver is written is pretty good…like the anatomy example
Thanks…
Q1
reading ur answer is making me confused…is the statement implying synthesis of Human and physical geography?
or is the relation between the 2 streams a synthetic ( manufactured) concept….if the former is correct ur answer :
1 has good structure
2 nice conclusion
though u could use some more examples to validate the statement
I have written it as synthesis of relationship between human societies and earth’s surface ( physical geography)
Thank you for review
Q2
Hey…
Intro needs to be shortened…
Body part includes good explanation of the two concepts…could hav included more examples…
Conclusion was also good…
Keep writing
Well written… comprehensive and linking with perspective part is very good aspect…
examples are good… keep writing
Q3
Intro was good..body was also good…i think conclusion needs improvement…
Keep writing…
Good attempt…. Write examples for each of the approaches… that adds more value…
Ovwerall answer is good.
Q4
Good answer…but intro i found a bit lengthy…
Body part was nicely written in points…could hav included some recent data…
Conclusion was crisp…
Keep writing…
Thank you for review,
I will improve these things
@@disqus_vFxQNIkgUf:disqus had done good review…
write some efforts towards this aspect in the world order.. mention some best practices…
Thank you study villae for review.